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Ummm... dude... I hate to have to say it, but maybe you should have kept that one to yourself as a practice piece and wait to submit it when it's a full game. I mean: 1. It seemed to be the same repetitive thing. 2. It was not at all rewarding to play. 3. It never seemed to end (which, were 1 and 2 not a factor, I might not have wanted it to). On the bright side, you have nowhere to go but up.
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